Tuesday, January 6, 2009

Tiffany's poetry


Tiffany broght home her poetry book yesterday. The whole book recieved 74/75 points, with the missing point due to some missed capital letters in some titles. Anyway, I thought I would share. (By the way, she is 10 years old)


Baby Blue

Lively feelings, slick ice, happiness

Soft sounds, sweet music, laughter

Tart blueberry, sweet candy, moist cookies

Wind on my face, raindrops everywhere, hands gripped

together

Makes us smile

(Here is a great one - Nate and I just looked at each other after reading it. We asked her where she comes up with her ideas. She just shrugged, and said it just comes to her)

Laments

A Love Life Gone Wrong

I am a tragic love life

I dress in a suit of rejection

And heartaches

I need hope to find your sense

And bring it to me

I am related to dread and hatred

I vacation in the deep falls of nothingness

My job is to run to your side and feel close

I desire to have my life linked

And entrusted

To your mind and heart

3 comments:

Denise said...

Her body might be 10 years old, but her mind is apparently 46. Wow.

Jared & Allyson said...

Wow! That's so impressive!

Daniel and Ashley said...

wow...that is amazing! she has got talent!!